Goubatsu. Chapter 1

Goubatsu

Title: Goubatsu
Author: Me/supersakii
Pairings: Read to find out
Bands: The GazettE, Alice Nine and others (was lazy to list ;_;”)
Warnings: Not saying yet, read to find out
Rating: NC 17 to R?
Summary: __fill in blanks yourself____
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the bands. I only own my OCs
Thanks to Amy for beta reading~

Chapter 1

{ Reita’s POV}

Today is a good day, our bands starts the week off today and we could chill for once. The club gigs and tours were tiring and stressing. About time we got to relax.

“We’re going to the onsen! We’re going to the onsen!” Aoi and Uruha sang as they strummed their acoustics in the minibus we were taking. Aoi is our crazy sex obsessed guitarist and Uruha is the whore other guitarist of our band.

“Hey Reita what are you going to do first at the onsen?” The short red head, who sat besides me, asked. His name was Ruki, our vocalist, my best friend and my love interest.

“I don’t know” I chuckled at his cute confused face.

“Then…why don’t we have a little time off from the others to go to the hot springs?” Ruki whispered into my ear and chuckled.

“Well why not” and I cuddled him. He was too fucking adorable.

“Hey you two love doves~ Want some food?” Kai asked. He was our bands drummer and cook. He always carries food with him.

“Sure” I said as I smothered my face in Ruki’s hair. Smelt like Pantene. “Ruki, why do you use a girl brand shampoo?”

“I don’t! I use garnier fruitus”

“Your hair should smell like fruits then” I laughed as he tried to pull a lock of his hair to his nose to sniff.

“I do use fucking garnier fruitus!”

“No chips for you until you admit you use Pantene” I joked and took the bag of sweet chilli sour cream chips that Kai was holding out to me. Ruki pouted, his secret move to make man or woman give in to what he wants. But it doesn’t work with me. I’m immune to it.

“No confession, no chips” I said and opened the bag up. I took out a chip and chucked in into my mouth.

“MmMmmmmm yummy” I wanted to tease him so much. He’s so cute when he’s all ‘I get bullied because I’m small’ mode.

“Okay okay! Reita is a big meanie” Ruki wailed and tried to take the packet off me. “I just want some chips!

“You didn’t admit it yet!” I fended off his flying darting hands from the bags of chips.

“I USE PANTENE NOW GIVE ME THE FUCKING CHIPPIES” Ruki cried as he sat onto his seat properly and pouted.

I patted his head and took out a chip. “That’s a good kid now say Ah”

“Ahhhhhhhhhhh” Ruki opened his mouth wide. I plopped the chip into his mouth and he quickly crunched it up.

“I wouldn’t use garnier fruitus anyway because Reita might eat me!” Ruki exclaimed and nuzzled into my arm as he happily crunched the remaining packet down.

“O ho ho ho~ we’re there” Aoi exclaimed and he approached the drivers seat and kept pressing the horn. The mini bus was coming to a stop to park in front of the onsen. The place didn’t look like what I had expected. I thought it was going to be all ancient and stuff but it’s stuck in limbo.

“First one to find them wins!” Uruha announced and only Aoi, who was stupid enough to believe he was actually going to win something, followed Uruha out the bus to find the others.

“I’ll go find our rooms first! See you two later” Kai announced and was next off the bus. I was alone, alone with Ruki. Finally.

“So…” I said coolly “What do you wanna do eh?” Ruki giggled and nuzzled into my arm abit more. He’s just like child but he’s fucking cuter than those little monsters of a nuisance.

“I know…what if we…” He whispered into my arm and gave my arm a little lick. I bet he’s one of those KinKi kid singers in disguise.

“Go find the others!” Ruki jumped up and gave me a quick unexpected peck on the cheek and ran off the bus.

“Cheeky kid” I chuckled and followed him off. I rubbed my cheek where he had kiss me. My cheeks felt as if the skin was being burned away.

“Come catch me Reita~” Ruki stuck out his arms like an aeroplane and zoomed towards the building. This is why I love him. He’s so fucking adorable and carefree. We’ve been dating for almost a year but he still hasn’t given me his thing yet. I wonder why he’s so scared to get laid.

“This week is going to be the best…old friends hanging out like the old times. Nothing to stop us, nothing to keep us from staying together” I quickly ran after the speeding aeroplane that was now entering into the airport of a building.

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HAPPY. . ._____[12 MAR 2008]| 08:30PM]

[ mood I  ♥ in love]

So happy. I finally get to see them again, my friends.
And I love him <3
We are all going to be happy just being together
I wonder if anyone remembers how we all use
to go to the same school and how we use to be
in the same classes as one another. I loved how
we use to skip the boring subjects and go play
at the fields then get caught by the principal.
Then we had to stay back after school and clean
our home room *laughs* I’ll never forget those days

AN: Bahaha my first fanfic that has nothing to do with me and my friend~ feedback, I’m not the best fanfic writer so don’t flame me T_T if you don’t like something, can you PLEASE comment nicely on what I should improve on xD anyways please tell me what you think about it so far. *no one comments at all* roflmao

5 Responses to “Goubatsu. Chapter 1”

  1. so far so good x)
    not many errors~
    just remember nxt time to put commas in after speech like;
    ‘this fanfic is good,’ said amy.

    unless the speech already has some form of punctuation like ? . ! or something
    xD yeah it might not be so important here but for school assignments and stuff you’ll need it :)

    okay i sound like an english teacher >_>

    but the first chap was good! excited for more ^^b

  2. ^-^ thankyou for beta reading~
    LOL i didn’t even know we were suppose to put comma’s after the sentences thingy T_T”
    i learnt something new today roflmao!

    Chapter 2’s on its way i think xD

  3. kyuuketsukii~ REITA Says:

    !(#*!(*@#@!$((!)(#!@*#!)@(#*!(#

    HOT HOT HOT ~ rukita ? reiki ? XD~
    i forgot buhh it’s LOVE

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